Dear readers,
These are the evaluations made by a classroom critic.
Jake B.
Artwork.
Jake's Art piece shows that she understood that there was so much tyranny, he expresses this by putting Napoleon at the top surrounded by the dogs. He also captured that Napoleon was holding back on the other animals by having him hold a money bag.
Galen B.
comic strip
Galen showed that the pigs had all of the power go to there head so the farm could not thrive. He also showed that the animals broke the commandments and all together changed them. Galen also conveyed how the pigs accentually became humans.
Emma H.
Artwork
Emma understood the propaganda and foreshadowing of the story. She used the crow and the commandments to show this. She also conveyed irony well with boxer going to the glue factory.
Porter N.
Artwork
Poter focused on how the animals were treated. He showed that the animals were treated the same way as they had been treated while Jone's was still in power. He also showed how the pigs became the humans by having the pig in clothes and standing on two legs.
Jamison C.
Video
This video showed the rebellion and how the rules were changed. They made the pigs power very obvious by having the pigs at the top of the barn,
Britta S.
Poem
Brittas poem talked about how persuasive the pigs were and how the pigs would also lie to the animals and tell them everything was ok.
Joel R.
Artwork
Joels project focused on how the pigs slowly progressed into humans through out the book.
Olivia T.
Artwork
Olivias picture explains how the animals and humans are equal and how the pigs adopt the humans vices which is ironic because Old Major told them not to very specifically.
Kady Z.
Video
Kady's video effectively showed the Problems with the windmill and the hardships of the animals. Their video also showed the hardships of rebellion, when all rebellion lead to was the same horrible life that the animals had before.
Matt B.
Artwork
Matts picture show napoleon having power because he is on the top of the barn. His picture also shows how snowball lost power by putting him at the bottom of the picture.
After looking at my peers projects I think that I did just as well as them. I showed that Napoleon gained power, what the animals did and how the pigs broke the rules. I also showed propaganda and how the commandments were changed into just one commandment.
Love, Amaya
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